【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- }5 ~% Z/ I9 z9 i8 E5 h- jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ R6 B/ a, H3 o5 L# fWe meet and talk everyday,
0 }; m* E' S! K/ B% V/ Q; CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* @: k0 q- x, Q- f; o2 g1 E* LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ r) q& a8 }+ ~2 P. y5 ]I want to confess that I love you,
/ k# z' u! w0 Y/ U' S; n, oBut I never did
; ]( A! i7 L. i: W3 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% r" Q# \9 a3 q0 p# I- _' T# YIf today isn’t too late,
/ R6 o# [. b6 X1 L3 q% ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& c7 Y, S5 h5 C2 QEntrust my love within your heart
8 ^9 A4 H: h6 YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 }  W4 \8 z$ O: nI want to confess that I love you,
) z9 U2 g! A) {& gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& a& W3 J8 ]) m/ k% O. X- ]8 L1 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( p9 S, z# y) \4 Q9 \; EEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% e! h, h+ {* a( M- e; REntrust my love within your heart
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8 z5 n" K- D) v/ L" A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 V) L/ Q/ Z8 I/ [+ }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" c1 M* @% ^1 a! P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 S; F% ]( L5 ]1 G% J. s4 ?% v( m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% ?. M" ~% w- O6 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' p3 n3 b% |, F; }7 G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 ~3 `: f  I  n: d5 g6 g) A) P<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 `( \/ s4 t  R5 e! B& ~( O<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 J$ y$ g$ {, O9 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# r# A1 `. F( Y/ |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ C+ Q. z! j3 n8 |( Y1 [8 \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 H! a( y3 X$ Q' \" ^8 I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& U+ w2 N& \4 Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- M$ b% N( P4 }9 k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% f! }( \: a% q+ h. n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 c- O9 C$ r" I) A+ W- n$ t" x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) |' d/ ?0 r8 h! o$ f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ m: o  B: Y+ P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* O& G6 x, S; E; |4 f# a6 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& ?2 q: \( B  L+ C/ U: `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; _( A- c  \8 D6 l9 Q0 T) q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 ^# L. v  j; p1 p& U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 [! q* r% Y% S! k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ x6 b0 ~- D2 Y6 M2 W6 G5 p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- ]8 h: r/ C2 O" q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# d% O7 w) s1 i! V& N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 h4 ^, a( v! x4 z, H- \! [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 L7 u/ ^7 e# P1 }6 @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( s8 t% j; `4 O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 [. ^/ K6 Q; v+ x' m- i- Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ ]. e4 i! z8 y" d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 ]9 l: x; K: X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>