【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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. d* x" m. K  J& P/ u9 A我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 i  {, Y% X1 ?* Y% u5 Z2 T( ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ M2 z( p  v. z/ a5 |6 AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" P# v& b7 s! o; H% p& m3 uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  u- w8 }7 y0 x* VI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# E! J. H/ L3 w3 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  k8 m2 F0 F) M' i# gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 G0 W" r- @4 @6 T7 g  u' N3 T0 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( @1 o8 G, Y; X/ o, u6 oI want to confess that I love you,
! a0 n( q6 w% Y& n; z& r3 c( P5 k$ cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 S0 z1 \8 ]% _5 m7 DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. G3 n" E' r) r( x4 j& K) oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) S6 ^" J' ?' Q- S; h( CCan I entrust it to you?
  r# W5 r5 U: B6 x0 d- o, e# AEntrust my love within your heart
  F- P2 k9 v* f3 F5 u0 D( ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 ~8 i! w' N% p. |* P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) U% A; k% T9 j; O# y+ ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% d( B9 C  k! h2 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 B' `4 u: v9 ?6 W% u' p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 ^% C( C+ [% k. \6 ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  h1 q6 `# a2 f. j' E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ M# I% _1 N$ x; d0 ]. Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 h0 ^4 T; f) P, K<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, q) Y0 ~; u; n" u* I3 o7 ]  |* }  V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ b8 M6 l. |; k3 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* o( O/ U+ v- R7 B/ e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 K# X. a3 S5 w# R+ b- N6 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 @7 V1 b* ?; u! R' B* B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 F+ W* C  K6 S/ q: z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! W: l" j! h8 j. a- v& V<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  o+ L7 s+ ]. ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. f$ P0 c! O& O5 \4 ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 E* w# g/ \4 \& j, x! D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* C* b8 s+ w% M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( k+ S5 q( C7 B2 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' m) S# e( ~% u% E( Z1 H6 P3 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" H  g1 b$ J' b+ @1 s& L7 }7 f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  D  E  C+ E3 R6 L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& }- }" Z3 }7 S9 D- V) {/ f7 n: k! l2 F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" z0 U4 F9 c% }/ M5 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% @5 N' A4 x5 b' |" E<P>But I never did </P>
7 k6 w( }) K9 k+ z1 Z/ [<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; V5 i+ f; p+ N9 `; I+ \( |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! d6 N/ t8 e, P0 B8 |* S" ]  p- T% Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 S' |. n+ u( j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 l& T- `! w" p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 p  `8 r$ N' c3 l- Q: [& l6 _1 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& V) M8 P1 X* e# O6 I0 X' W- B4 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>