【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
2 m9 ^$ ]3 l& o# L7 c2 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ b1 I9 U' l- k% |I would probably know how you feel
# |8 |: q6 B: j* t" e* J. fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 [% |) O) l" @( p9 ], RBut I never did
3 W( G8 ~2 ?, ]- _- o. O6 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 v& r  \5 M& o6 {, e1 R4 ^3 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 [! H0 K0 t9 N" F3 |Entrust my love within your heart
( U* Q2 |: C  _$ z6 i: |; tLove… just the word love
0 q, l5 V( ~$ r! h! d9 x' q1 _Why is it so difficult to express?
8 \, h/ y4 k# j9 d  m' g3 r) k7 R8 c3 uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 c7 Z  r  A3 t' [; PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  I+ ]# r+ |3 a; _8 F: W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* t9 ]7 @7 m! ], Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 Y) W/ x& D0 E<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 j$ |+ c- Q- l2 D" T5 y! Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* n% N0 i8 q( ^<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( S" o3 E3 m1 t# o+ O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 d! X1 P  v) f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ x5 v! f0 N) C! X4 {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% \; N" k3 o5 W: v( h+ p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; T% ]1 D, z" W/ m* q$ p- l6 s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 f2 r2 z" h8 e% e; u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) `8 d  q9 U) h# ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& l$ |" z# P1 Y- {7 {- d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; W- W* L& C* c( Z0 u# m! }0 p% T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ N0 \- d/ x1 r+ Q( \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: F2 `3 e- r4 [; X  |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; v3 H) K% U4 b2 H& O" {2 M+ J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ g3 i8 r( m4 x1 k; z, \- @1 h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 p4 U+ y& I8 f2 O! u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 ~' ^3 i- z: v. p$ P* M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 ?* Z* j1 C+ F! c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) M) e0 q' ^; p" {" x, r, m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% X' `4 K0 \4 }5 u; C& b2 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 K$ O2 \8 i. ?* N; C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ J+ f6 F. n% q6 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 i' Z) ~1 }% S$ D1 Z# a  ^! R! g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# j' [9 w' Z3 L6 J0 ?, Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 ~+ j% g/ i) e8 ~$ V7 v! S* Y! L$ V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>