【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 |* K9 ~$ P' U1 q. jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' z7 V  _" W9 `: n4 J# ?From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  F& j% e7 C% J4 F9 I- ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  K) C7 ~# u0 e6 A) J! w: aWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 |9 X$ Z3 c! }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 j4 Y" Y1 x1 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" V0 A9 M! Q( g, a. SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 Y6 @. g* `4 u/ h+ l; lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 d( Q0 L3 ]( S0 f8 H( F0 ~; m  EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( r% {& @! h: L- H$ x3 y: z) Y5 ?" q, kEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 c/ B( J7 w) U% H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ D, j5 C3 v9 w$ H2 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& V, f+ Q: L3 y8 r8 {" U) a: Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& ^  n$ C/ _# d* w1 l4 N# Z1 ^* G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, m+ Z4 a: U: l: }5 s/ {6 d/ c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 P: x$ M& S" I& i1 R6 B: {) Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# |: d+ }& n3 m1 g' k9 g* M2 m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' x8 ^* c! H* o: Z! n& p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 E$ d! Z% W, W/ @9 K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 f3 M6 a2 U8 k9 Q9 O2 B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) o# C2 y8 k; ^  B0 g: J/ d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ A' ~0 D1 u- d3 `5 G# Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! Z1 \9 p. u1 ~- U( @6 Y8 W<P>但我不会</P>
' Y/ m4 A' u4 {6 x+ M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 @0 A* @; s2 M6 j; L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) h1 i( E0 t7 {' ?, }+ n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 B" [! W; W0 [4 \4 x" P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# |3 b9 e1 T9 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 z3 h: u- U. j# x9 G+ g: Y% L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 ?! Z3 H# n. ]6 }' N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 r6 O: M$ O* }/ j; |7 }3 ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 x( e, Y0 I3 E/ q. c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) f0 k! K6 j# p& b3 n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 [4 S# g) B! X$ |' ~9 J, G<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" C" P( T/ M  X, \" m' o<P>But I never did </P>
: B0 E% Z/ i. n# q: L<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 E3 f; Q' r! [+ R# k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 N. ~. N+ K( e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 [  z3 I- ^$ X2 C3 V' j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, q2 |: H7 _: {$ @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 S6 p" n/ o1 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) t- Z& T& D2 O2 I/ S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 w" Y! i7 p8 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  ]9 S- j9 \0 Z  R5 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 K9 d( ~/ `$ R5 Q  `5 y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- i4 j( A2 W; l5 O+ A8 |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( b- d1 ^9 a5 {" z% i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>