【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 r1 Z. m% f- P2 U. f& e! WI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 w" u3 W) N# k0 bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# U; Y. S5 b4 i2 }2 {! ]# F% O+ a% oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ Y2 Y( P1 A) l* ~6 J, v0 |+ RI would probably know how you feel
. k* C$ t7 x% m1 LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 ^: B3 x- D6 mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 M& b) ?" I6 ?8 S! P  hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ^+ }; q* f3 [7 B; @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& E2 b5 a9 }4 \) yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 Q: s5 d& }( j$ R" Y+ {6 oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. A$ V6 G! I0 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. Q  p$ @4 M; l' x5 n2 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 d$ T; I5 P$ E( y6 s! k/ UEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 O* b( x, a8 |+ @" G/ y. {+ b( E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* D! j0 Y4 [2 B/ [# c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ n6 _' l" W/ D: O# U! t- l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ p& l( o8 M8 x. j+ n4 f! l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 w* v9 K! N. B' W/ x& H# B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( @$ h9 ^; v  F+ v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 A5 }$ z4 h" U" U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 H8 p0 u% ^: A3 j. g( b* R: `7 Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) A3 E; |% E2 |7 m  E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ x0 C+ }. ?3 m+ v5 }) X* B; P9 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 I; B) X% k, B: x" U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 C( q4 G) w: W7 m, @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( E, @2 h) ^9 A+ O5 o$ q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 C4 h6 b4 }  c' G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' G3 R' J5 A& q  X2 P' ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' i" q9 D- g& w7 X# J% M6 G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 S* |! I' A' Z7 T7 z) K4 X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. e% c1 f* Y! A, v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ l0 y+ m+ z5 I/ b) x8 o+ r: [7 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' `: z% R& U" m% S+ A+ x- q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- g* Q& ^, ~) L% x: R1 t) |0 m7 `% [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ^; J: }- L* J) v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& V* n7 X2 s  b2 @; T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 [& J9 m' ?8 Z- H2 o% H/ q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' H' H2 k( S% C: P; G# l, `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* J- I  \; x' ~( \) z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( P: {9 C3 d" k0 d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 n) s4 u* W7 h* Z$ J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( y  i% M4 @( l, I  k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>