【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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+ a; i8 m+ `: {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' p$ R. K5 j9 O6 {I already loved you with all my heart
- A# D+ l# c+ G. `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- P# V% p5 L0 lI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 d/ W8 C1 H% j# N! w; D0 `& II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ m4 q# N. b: D# G2 ?! YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 t. r# l: X+ u+ vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ]! m) B. E3 i6 ~$ p. J! |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* a2 v7 g4 Y! M- t# i* R. xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, {- B! u  o& ]" z( C4 @3 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- }" k5 M0 @) |4 M/ ~1 S6 y1 LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, w/ e" T( A% k6 g. P- ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* l  h, [0 b: [7 y2 mCan I entrust it to you?
3 j4 t8 t& G+ w2 f, b! H* X! A+ AEntrust my love within your heart
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7 }; F. I$ j9 F7 G$ ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 x& |' B3 c  W& b" z0 P+ Z5 [" a3 J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 a5 y, d! D/ C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 r: O% z7 I3 c% G0 u. u$ m3 ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 e8 y# H! N. W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" X7 _/ P$ s3 `% m" [3 m, ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 U; }6 X0 p' R: W- l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' P$ `: s+ U% C0 U' R$ Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* \: Z, W: Q+ v$ J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. \8 y! U/ G# F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ \* \9 A4 b0 `8 b: Z4 O& }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! P( o3 C6 w9 c1 b2 |# V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 j* V( E5 }& T1 u& j2 Q" o5 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 Y4 p' s* i" o* J& y! L1 e; I) g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 p/ u, c: C' }8 z2 ?. F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( f8 P/ N3 @9 _+ |# O& V# V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: ?6 T1 |; ~; j( o3 a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) @; m5 D( W3 B& r' \8 r8 l4 Z* W% |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" k1 @5 }3 {' W( g& o4 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 k( T3 f# W( H+ x9 K" |9 \. ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; I6 o( D0 ~: v  d  y4 h  E) Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, V1 E% D" ?9 \* @$ q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  `$ S) c+ W: s5 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 J2 Q# F* i9 d: E5 I8 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! l: b5 U) [2 ]6 ?) U: C4 {" c) [  L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 z6 O7 U5 i7 P# v0 f$ \. O6 `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ |# T7 z% f: q# G# z9 J5 ~" u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 j6 J9 i" a, Z5 ~; T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 E7 k7 l# V- D! H+ m<P>But I never did </P>
- Z- F4 e9 [0 Z  E* \& {<P>但我不会 </P>
& M1 e9 y8 `! }! Y7 O8 x- G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 c, S3 ~7 {0 y8 I' d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 S* @8 U/ Z) Z: ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" [/ J! |8 E. f6 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- Y: r' f% C+ ]' p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 J" i- w# h8 `' @( [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ e: D5 B  _- {* n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' b6 a$ n. m$ b3 R. @& U: m$ `+ [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>