【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 Y. J3 j/ y& T: {# m( ?我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( P; m( K# X$ v8 @4 l! {: N2 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! S6 `. G% Y: r, F7 EI already loved you with all my heart
$ w1 R+ v; i3 }- l3 [7 Z5 ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 X0 z' i+ G% n+ P2 C. n# jLove… just the word love
$ A6 N3 ?3 H3 s/ z1 l5 D' Q* TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 C" L! N4 O7 BBut I never did
3 L, L' z: ?5 c7 H6 x+ ?4 g! {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 C! Y  {' o. t- K: m! e4 O  l; a- Z( FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; k, @  F) Q' ]I want to confess that I love you,
# R9 X6 `0 V2 P7 Q5 pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 D# ^2 z. j7 b& i1 R& S4 P- M+ VIf today isn’t too late,
* k7 h" r6 w  N" F/ I/ _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  l/ s' i* j4 ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' h8 `4 M/ W, ?+ {! ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

# R9 W+ @. h% Q, H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 T/ q2 R7 C: Q7 }6 p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 r. ^( d4 R. @& k* A( O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 M2 m) O4 ~* S; d, n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* [1 j' Y2 I' Q" D/ g! x0 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 k$ L9 e* U* p, q! K) z, o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 G  @6 g  d+ r. V8 |! l4 v/ n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 _4 T9 I, v0 I) T8 Z! E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 f+ h; S# a- H% M7 x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 l7 y$ J& ?- \7 ~5 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 o, T! r9 ^5 K0 @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) B0 a3 L! ?( b: A<P>但我不会</P>
+ \; A6 H2 w3 n& J& J% K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' T5 m! a% [0 M0 E" |/ ]: ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 {! [1 D5 W3 ]6 U& o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 R1 o- K4 L) k. r+ B3 l  F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( g% }3 p/ V. \# u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 [! ?0 w$ U$ N! V$ V+ v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" n9 G" G" i; q, {, ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  o  W' [* ^* C7 T) @# h2 N6 S  @( y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 r2 ?, ?5 `% z; T6 s: \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' f& R( n$ W! t8 x  ~5 T: P1 ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 n4 P( R. J$ @% o5 a  C4 U) _+ r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: A* h/ B/ R0 p5 S) s9 L2 h' f3 _1 i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( [' D1 V( O4 Z% [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ K; T6 N8 ]4 T" I$ Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: j5 L$ F$ n- Y+ |8 D% U- I+ V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 s& A2 M4 E) @  D( r# z& U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% q/ }& Z' g! |* {$ u5 L: J* f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" E3 A# U3 T4 r, [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ Q8 D& @4 {9 z7 y) {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 [7 n' ?# a; L' ?0 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, F# K7 [; P) S) f3 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 K; i8 X! l8 e' ]$ F  G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 X1 U$ y! |3 o; y/ D: o, O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>