【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 j9 ^" I, d$ Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" b. l7 N; ^4 g$ l4 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* B+ H' Q2 x6 v0 ], |1 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
# x# L+ B1 R% _. I2 j9 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, t7 p! X& O+ EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) {, S9 ~6 O9 r" |& z4 FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" u5 G8 G7 W! Y. F% {6 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% s2 |" b# k. h, X- l8 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. b7 G. k1 s. t- EI’m still filled with fear
4 z- X; N+ e  B, S+ yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  F% D# d" D: X% l' N+ RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" t5 @& d* g7 }* xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 J4 W. k2 w" u1 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  f. q- N9 M8 ]# M( W$ p5 s/ G: d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ]  t! T3 ^# t& C% M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& l  b) x8 [1 F6 x7 _( ^% Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 S3 n# Y) m0 B, _4 z- R/ X+ P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ O7 Z6 }4 }3 u; Q- J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 R6 {% S6 T" R5 c& @( W0 z3 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) x# i! a2 y( f! t( `  t0 X- N5 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: _% B5 ^( ~4 a# o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! s9 q( y) ]3 A+ q& X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 m! o; T( `! T% u5 \# Z9 K5 Z& Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* e1 k* C& H9 q8 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( j8 T  d1 ~. U7 p; \3 x0 s6 b) Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 [# c  E# L/ r$ ?0 E; J/ N; T/ Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. g% |9 T% l4 l9 g. f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 x4 ?6 w/ O1 X# z, F& h% ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ F  j4 K! Z! E6 ^3 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 A2 g0 Y, ^3 A2 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 A( ~! N& H4 A* X' B6 w6 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 z& l$ F. F/ L' S; R. m* A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  T7 m' t( z! c  x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: ^' e1 C; Q" u% [. A* Q" |* i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 I. n( l+ ]0 V- e, {/ G/ s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 B% {/ e9 p  f! ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>