【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. H- \- K  o* y. z. H; J$ d: zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 Y, e" ?5 F+ C: T& IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) W, f% n# z2 e+ F. d- hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- K  {8 r* `5 [2 C- MEvery other word you utter is love
8 N: l- Y, J' G6 N0 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 k# J, ^* Y/ I" l% b  nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 Q/ N6 Q* C9 M4 o7 o. z5 `6 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% v- D1 F4 C* V( QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% \0 x! D. s- v- k+ o' _, t" ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 C, b) {7 i0 I. m7 r9 ?+ qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 z- W; k1 N3 Z) ?" c, KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. V5 ?, S9 N  |/ O( N9 y5 u, w* u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; D8 l; i# s+ g6 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 ]7 s" X0 d) _  [$ ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# O5 K% m9 z; R  H% b5 D, h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' n/ x2 c# L( I, H( u- C# D: ]; H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Y6 v4 P' X  }7 L& V) r4 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ w' p) l* W1 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 u' |1 E. ~6 ^8 K% o. K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  K9 a7 P4 f) z7 E0 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% a& w  E) }, U9 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& w! |! J& A( z$ }- e9 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) c& o% T- T; v- x% p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 }& @) F0 r  N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ H7 e( o! K* _- b/ F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ e* x4 g* j6 [' E+ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ?/ A6 h6 h! X+ @' y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# B/ W' y% [5 n; p+ X1 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 o! t- M) S/ u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 N7 \# p4 I% r% {' D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, V6 [( j/ e9 A5 y6 H  `/ g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) o1 I- ]. b! _5 y  a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 E1 G2 |+ V3 W& D4 c* j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ g! X" O; x2 _# ^% r$ \- D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, k5 W1 b, k% Q7 c8 i. x- q% x! }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: ^7 V7 W( O) M6 s7 |9 K0 Q; z; d* O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 Z$ S1 v/ \& |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" Y+ ~* x7 R: l# k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: |0 u+ k. ~+ h/ {2 |$ t- B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; D6 j( f5 |9 d! l5 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. O2 H$ g$ {- ^5 F2 _) j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, F- l% _# J* q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 D* g2 ^7 R) Q: [# a" U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" I6 E6 L/ v1 M! @. y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  f  z+ k) s, @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 J- _6 x& _; b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' k, z* r( D0 M- b9 k  I我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>