【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 S- M% J! i1 Z1 x$ u% J: M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) `6 R+ w+ x! Y: t. tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 o8 Q5 z+ Q, I+ k6 y+ BThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 `- h7 v. C" R- n0 o2 ]" YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! l3 P$ b# f6 D% L+ f* \$ UYou needn’t fear anything
5 U1 A4 w7 K; q* K( x& X9 ^! MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. `+ H/ Y1 p9 V/ q* t- V2 vEvery other word you utter is love
& a/ _6 ~" s. k1 K( bI really want to know just how much you love me
: Z+ d  E1 S/ s4 Z& NI love you I love you with all my heart
( O6 e  D8 q+ PNothing can compare to my love
& V+ `8 J" J( r! VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* y; c( L, P/ h+ XI want so much to see inside your heart
# ~  o2 d" w0 o, m5 ?. ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 y- j$ Y% X# R7 n1 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 k: Y! b3 t, S9 X  L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& E8 i* l$ v* M# @' ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 V% Q, J+ t' d  Z' }6 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 h+ S- J+ h0 c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' _4 }5 z6 }$ e. c6 ^0 Q: ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ l6 d  r! i5 u5 z! P- G+ i6 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. s/ U5 C; F6 o9 B5 b( h5 J; M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 I0 @. }# M  j  T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. X4 U* C0 i' @) d1 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" N- _3 \0 x" G. e7 j/ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& S" g( r, I' g' p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& n0 f; a3 J; V6 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- S+ T+ B6 h1 g4 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, j# g" Q1 w8 O( c# ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 u; |! B9 `* j$ C) a2 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! Z2 t1 H( Y( d+ R0 P& I/ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, I8 B4 S& {$ b# F6 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ^5 e# N' u; y/ I- B( b. x' ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 s3 }! W7 e- a% K/ J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ x8 B$ {, @9 ], [: t& w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# I4 k4 a6 {3 y; S7 _' H8 S- g. q* I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 k4 _2 Q, ?! f4 ^" }" f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  Y/ `* h6 E1 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. }& H- r! ~; w: I2 N- n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) O7 `5 F+ V2 I% |4 S" r3 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 t7 U" B' a$ ^5 H7 A6 m7 i/ V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  J* P6 H1 ~. C1 c: [. j  s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 J! y1 Y" f! f; X1 g; f我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* T9 p- q$ M: }  t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>