【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; O% x/ w; y" n  X% l! H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% c$ L; l5 b) o  ~3 w7 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 B( c" u5 t. Q- _4 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 @. Q- r- l+ t$ C' z, n1 \! bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# h$ K$ e. i) H: D  }, @% vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' V- p) k! S$ m; \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ t: J$ G* z* D% \; f  _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 T% Q+ ^: S; z" H: E. P9 |  KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* g. [/ U! n9 {. C* ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! q0 F5 f7 G; C4 B- P3 O9 W4 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) x& ?8 P$ \* f/ `8 M6 B; c1 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- f( y9 N# |  [' N+ I2 p7 q( v4 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Y, o, \, u! _/ g! qI regret not dying
5 m. W  R/ U: @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# A' T# Q2 O( P" O( D: D% v' I: fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) I) |5 F  l0 N0 A& @! |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 q! f" }7 {: i; }# ^1 O0 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. E8 [  `+ m, ]3 o% c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 q! L" G5 y" u, ~) _  Q5 e; j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 s" ~, o$ T- O! S2 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ?! f! v4 q& U  e7 \5 G8 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  l( a3 s7 Z  E# A5 P' e$ }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 f/ o/ [( e9 c% l" i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 y" y2 b& j3 H) a# h. A9 M6 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) F" ?" K2 @: e7 p! C0 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 @) O& c2 J0 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ s" Y' |) {5 L8 o: Q& P0 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" r/ \( ~' H7 |) F: Z: [' d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 y$ F, O/ S! O  D& F7 u/ ]2 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ a0 d; l4 {" [* o7 q) Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 {3 p4 v! L; l$ E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  @6 P) {3 x7 D6 x, M" [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ?6 l# W0 W& M2 s) j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" h& Q% W- U, }+ Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& k! o  ~" k. M0 K. r5 {7 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 \0 Z/ q! P# o5 J: q. C) `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) `) q0 ~( U/ x; n' X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( Q+ Y5 l$ U6 y3 |+ u2 R: a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" H' Z# o9 w+ [' n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 }- l/ s( x; W* |  U# A6 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 F' X2 \; R# N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, r- S; h  R7 {0 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
) Q/ \$ L/ v; D, q2 W; {( Y! z9 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 [  d$ m" C& b7 T, p1 ~" V' l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& K  [+ ?, @$ a- p* L- V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 H6 U6 @3 K7 Y) [8 z! c" w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ m8 N$ m& k  f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>