【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 A* ^% d. p0 i$ s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) @0 L  b2 T6 w/ rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 z. B. f+ y/ L2 L0 y5 \The sky is happy down to its soul
1 t& b% w, v( o/ EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! M) I( l: M8 A' t, g  ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 V6 M% U7 u0 e1 QI love you I love you with all my heart
# `! I/ P# ~0 w$ |- I/ iNothing can compare to my love
4 E  u: f1 i' |: s2 i) fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& [+ C# ?* v9 L! K  s3 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* i$ I# T; H" M# JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 x4 g( L8 G6 Z" k% kI regret not dying
7 |5 e& V+ p; t  e8 T: ^1 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 F+ d0 x8 c* T$ `/ H" O. uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% d( B, H" i$ ]6 [& `4 R& fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# {* g& J# ^# i5 w& x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ ^0 I4 k$ U5 n1 o- E4 I; b$ h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 J4 ]3 ~, B' b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% O" P7 C1 V  Q( r, w1 p* {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. t* n9 g/ ~. F% t' D. @: H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ q& _. R# J9 J( }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  D3 F3 u1 H7 m$ j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 s' N' I% w- N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, p* Y9 U( m8 a6 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: T9 g( G" ~' q) c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: [0 T- }; c$ f3 H- i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, t, J- _0 k' D& `1 a' S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" f, \" f2 i1 A; `% p9 T% `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  W0 U+ Q/ Z* q0 g: e" w- L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! b) Q* z" ~; M2 B0 h) p. O" d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" L" w1 R# ]- n3 P8 H# Q; f2 Q" @' o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! {7 J8 }8 C3 f( W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 F  c7 w+ B2 k3 w) ?3 Y, L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. Q! B: q- P) k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 l+ q% v* E0 g9 n- m' V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Q1 G+ e# H  n7 q# L  D- z" U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" W1 ~8 I9 R0 {* f* y" k, S: x<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 M) x& M( O: _+ C9 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: q) Z& R8 j/ x2 w. f+ q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  A4 J6 [+ X3 i+ J8 Q7 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" V2 t2 a; s( ^& o& `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 ~1 b' F9 a- U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' c- g" v  v* Q' D. H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& O. ~( Z2 f( P1 ]" n9 q6 H. i2 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 v% u8 I5 a' }& K. q" Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 K% j9 ^2 P: y" C6 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* N% i: l# M" Z9 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>