【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 A* n9 p: Z) |% @! \8 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 p7 }/ }* I5 F) N$ q6 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' d6 l4 N# F  }4 O2 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ m1 B: G3 a8 q, i9 w3 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
, |" l! B9 f# c: fWith the moon kissing it every night
8 m2 u* F/ s' QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 F9 c7 c  v; zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 j. ]" R: T. j1 a- B2 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ Q: b8 A4 I+ E& c1 a+ jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& I  T4 U8 V! j! C0 k( LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& F0 @( O6 D" L' Q0 s3 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- ]$ i8 Q8 g) G/ X: HI’m still filled with fear
7 K$ f9 K, x1 A2 F7 D5 E3 F  SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* j1 u  d0 U  w7 c$ OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% J! e+ ?2 e0 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" ]$ J0 i/ e8 H+ B+ c1 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 K) S7 R5 D# s. q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- u; }& j  A; g5 ~) H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 \+ f, p* e# W, f7 r$ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 k7 G, J& ^6 a5 y( D* k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' j# h7 \# |4 _0 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, C; k' ]8 u/ H- R% o, N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& M$ d9 j6 I( O- _' o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ o' p% T+ d6 v1 X& [# k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! N; `; R) x: e9 m+ [  E3 i9 ~6 a" z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 w" H! D. W# u& r6 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% o1 h; x* B! f4 u9 l6 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ `* Z- h- X. i, o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 ~* W0 w) N, f/ c5 S  w: y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 y6 L2 e0 |7 ^0 H! V, J1 N9 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: i( z% b( Q# i  `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 a$ S' B* s. ~" r" @5 Q0 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; t) }2 t$ z# }1 l: a* D$ K- K( m5 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 o  a" {$ h* z% ~$ x; }& M+ Z% @! i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 E! b+ |% t2 p. l/ k. r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 X3 v9 W! h! ^* H: g: |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' c1 J! Y( g3 {: o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' b6 c: \0 a" I# \  O) o# K9 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 a1 h' O  v$ X! f1 Y  W: v. n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; n' b" A3 h& ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 E% g/ P! J( d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: e& K0 n+ C, _+ c! e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: F% S4 `& f( Z6 [. q; f. E( X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: k0 N, [2 |  ^" B1 B8 x2 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ c! y$ {7 V( S% R; E1 N' `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 w- A- Q% |0 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ B% H, X5 k" u5 p. K* h+ W/ r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 Q% H6 x7 N' Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  \' z" s, h4 Y# x! o: V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: i7 L" X& {' w( O( h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>