【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 J+ [2 x, [; c5 _  V: m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; J. X+ `+ R" QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) j0 B4 x5 I  QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ s, N! v8 l/ \1 I9 w3 h. Z  SYou needn’t fear anything
8 [) e# a( k0 J+ f$ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 ^0 ^) B9 L/ W/ m6 j. pI love you I love you with all my heart
! F! J9 k7 L2 ]1 N7 `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( v* G( l+ O% }( ^# i- wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 m" S; z+ I$ R2 b9 J4 m1 X2 AI want so much to see inside your heart
  b" t" H! Q: o* P6 \/ KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) A4 l+ A5 u( I, ]6 B% gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 o! r% H0 s6 n& @+ g- c# JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 w) m* z& o* ]1 n1 K* bWith such a tongue as yours,
& a! y* l" l, A( D0 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- o1 J) \6 E: }( o1 C1 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ K: @3 y+ k/ [. v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: G) j5 ]* c6 z# d9 L. d& w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- g/ m3 G4 L' r  y8 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# M- J) J8 s; ~- [/ ~9 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% f9 T# j! S) B0 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 q/ M0 e# J; n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 N6 U1 p# \2 b: n: q, q) q3 }2 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: a" y) @- Y+ l2 Z) E' {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 c* U& y$ @4 r& b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 g0 o1 ], u- d+ ?5 M1 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ v# s0 X8 r* R) Q# }7 ~- [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  D; H! m  O  h4 h! c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 T/ D* M4 n% x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ]4 y& O- u) L3 h  `7 @. u( j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 P* q% x( j( L1 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! C# b5 A, h7 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 O; E; f/ X) J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, V: d1 C) k& e% F: l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. b+ Z, e! O0 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ U# H( y- n0 j9 b: t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 s. O& y6 l$ @( Z4 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; X0 {4 g9 J% P* j; u7 n# _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) b% F/ R) @! ^; N5 X  \# x1 X- e  }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 A7 D5 g# g+ q' C) R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>