【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 w" q' @% [: b; }/ U  r7 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
* t* k# O$ m4 }9 s, l9 `2 l. `. ]' qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 A/ O7 w5 P7 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' ?0 ?! v! D2 N+ P. |- UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ ]" H* h- X9 i8 V/ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. U9 ^* ?, u1 q3 h% _" ?You needn’t fear anything
% V$ l& L  D7 M) G& z- ~; k$ ]. TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% q. A7 `$ S( o; p& U5 X: P+ s; I: ?I really want to know just how much you love me
! x% [, e- O# b0 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: j" j# o% ?, A3 w6 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# G, X2 F4 e/ e" k8 ?0 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, G3 v* R, c" l3 {/ W$ f' ]I want so much to see inside your heart
& k0 H% p* u5 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) G" x: }2 \# G/ E' c& E! rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) h# k: X. {( J) T! d& h1 y$ v, }- oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ x- y' L* Y7 K9 }- nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 h* d. d; `9 s6 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 M/ V5 X% q0 f$ M1 Y5 \" A2 C* T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& m( e3 x: p$ r+ p" A6 i+ V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% G) O( f: w2 L: i" w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! `/ O0 a& x5 `3 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* j* [/ |; |9 F2 [* o2 n; E9 C- [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" V- L: @& {: y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; s* q5 ~6 {2 W. \0 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ a, B: @0 H3 t1 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 g9 H0 K8 a3 }. E+ J) N# ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! Y$ p$ h2 j8 W! Z" E' m+ D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: _( {( j3 g" ]( r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 z: X$ t! v4 `" R) {0 E& E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ~5 B5 e/ }* _2 }% ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ m" O( C; B) _5 S/ X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ d  {+ u0 C, E2 o- C+ g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 R8 g/ F* v' M) a* U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- a7 J0 V* L1 l4 }0 V7 u$ e: v3 {/ s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# _0 i, _; J1 J0 Y# ^% \; w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 `  N& I) {- b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( P' {7 s8 Y, C5 [; ]5 P* i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) h, T+ ^7 @7 n+ c  c; r! H0 ?8 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 k/ O3 A+ ~- o  x5 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& Z% p) o: g# N/ b3 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# g6 o& u3 X( W/ v% n4 I3 W" |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; T5 z0 r$ U, H! d) B- y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! Z" X( U& h9 g, f/ a6 m  d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 j3 z& }/ I. N7 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. N9 a/ w) H, O- P- s! u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>