【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, t  k$ L: J9 E0 J/ Z6 D9 a1 ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! n8 d/ W$ N, O! ~3 F. S' W$ [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 _! O( z* r+ C  n- ^5 DWith the moon kissing it every night
, Y- e3 D, i9 D) n4 ~. q& _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% w- r- ^( p$ a2 k, Y. KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- w$ m  b& f6 R" ]9 j0 T& C+ gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 s$ W) g8 h) Y4 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" K8 S4 J/ l" y9 U( GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ^4 w) `! P* w' q1 PI’m still filled with fear
) D3 ^7 Z0 Z( U! vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 Z7 S( E5 Z- N. r0 t7 [5 `) QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 e. b# |( z( ^2 ~  y# D/ u- SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 {' y0 I; R- N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" [! D" o# I% T( B8 }; i' Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ~' _. g5 ~, B8 Z* G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 F- J. t) {( D; }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 {; @# k8 y" c* \7 w6 X5 t/ P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 c6 U5 s7 D& m. s& K( f$ E2 R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  e1 s9 ~- f1 S3 h1 u( y& ~5 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ t9 V+ Q. V2 P9 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ k' D2 p$ ~7 r* F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, T9 D. n2 X0 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ _2 ]: N- Q0 }/ {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: A5 ~. p% B$ r0 I$ x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ~4 F2 h+ q: k5 ~$ s! E& S) U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  O4 q6 Z# G1 J6 |, L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! S* X, r, z5 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% K0 P+ j; s3 [$ V( h( e" |& z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ C3 q' h7 _6 F4 w: q2 [0 l- {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 f* p9 w. C0 w3 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) A9 ^$ r8 M, _5 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& j0 M, W2 D6 h/ P' y3 J我请你剖开它

0 Z; c! P* u2 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 D  _+ h0 e1 X, A# Y/ K! Q4 z2 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>