【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
# G. W4 N2 ?7 V" zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ f. c  o, f$ r. k. f9 l' {: iThe sky is happy down to its soul
" E, [. @) g* y& ~3 g2 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  K) h$ g1 m* A/ A* Z6 |2 Q) DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, a" G. n) R, wI love you I love you with all my heart
5 i# G" w3 b# d% d5 C0 ~Nothing can compare to my love
9 ~! y- R, P3 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 [4 A1 d+ M  q; o' IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 F- p% G+ e: b$ pI want so much to see inside your heart
( k5 \! d: W3 m4 p& bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 g- J& D) j* I' ~# G5 z6 jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: R" [) ]! k) X7 Y1 g& yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 e/ Z& v7 l8 D! HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 a( B) |" F4 j) T$ N* D. ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) b% L9 B7 n" {, ?( a1 u# U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ |  u+ i+ S- E% X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. n! Z- u! G) J; r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  l3 u* z9 I0 S5 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 L$ d% ]2 B/ Q2 F9 q8 ]" E- \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 P/ T1 E4 P$ {- a% `" e& {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 y& y$ S0 }$ C) p6 S  \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 N6 r, b2 U8 @* Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& {- I4 ?# H/ A/ K  p5 Z& V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 e9 p' G  V2 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. G" T8 L6 ?0 Z" d4 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" X1 a2 W# a5 f1 U/ [% G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" J% r. P4 ^' @' {1 o, L8 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) A) _9 u' g. M- S9 e1 B( j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 B: T9 h) `% y9 J( s. ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! \' ~9 c9 z, `& ^. \  }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 Q9 q. w/ X9 \+ p6 `8 |$ b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  o9 l; X( A7 g( i# V& Q7 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. D$ {8 @! @- e$ M9 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, d6 p/ ~5 y( a% }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" u7 A  @4 y5 f( T/ F0 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' N; i4 {0 l3 y2 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; {# z7 B. H. Z8 J5 R$ z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 D: I8 i5 n2 \0 f7 E, s  }  u, p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* o9 ~  u1 w0 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% v3 i. X2 E! x+ r- Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>