【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Z3 J6 ~$ L6 j( @& ^歌词我附在后面。
! n( d7 B; F7 N/ k2 p0 p7 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 c! a4 k0 j6 I) u4 G: k- r& mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" H( t' `3 _# F' p" oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" z, h" Y  c* c: Y; S" s) {Seeing the sky content with its love
4 W6 y6 Q5 A4 _8 x7 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% \$ z7 w' X8 EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 d0 ?- O, L1 a9 LI want so much to see inside your heart
/ r6 s* H* t* a/ BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- M! N. m2 l3 A- }, jI regret not dying
# T5 P& P* b* v) S+ YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" @; u' J6 _3 [: `' HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 ?2 j2 \4 J- t3 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 H& U5 u" ?+ a3 N4 q  |4 |  |. K( s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ o+ k3 h& J: Z1 Z! N7 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, G) A. f' _" K6 A6 [) R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 h7 u1 ~  G. z0 x2 u9 Z* g, |5 c- n1 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' B6 S% ]) h# Z" C$ W- h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 q& O. i, J. C$ ~4 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  N6 m& x$ d! o7 v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' [- q& t0 x: i! U- `  v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" p3 U4 f% D4 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* n  _( _9 X( T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ U- {( O& K5 U$ _8 R' O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ B2 o+ P, s0 i; A! o+ M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) W. r+ ~9 r, M$ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( T$ L0 F# w% L- j# B; y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 i8 r% h( W9 K$ [( j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) q0 n8 H! T4 v* }- P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; p% s: ~+ a* w7 J6 F8 e0 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  q9 _9 ]" `$ \; d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 D; ~7 @; x. {0 Q& s, E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 e* A" H" f& V7 i3 T" Y+ R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 |& A+ ?7 s& m/ p: Y" {) |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 D9 _( E" V) C: W$ C3 L8 f3 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 ^$ U- P0 W" ~4 t7 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. O. L8 d+ K( I$ V2 D* q7 t" C<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 q: p3 t1 W# ~# Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, u, j* F. _  H- p' L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! h! e4 c; z- r0 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% I) r( N: b( }/ ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 W% T; N3 u% v/ T8 f5 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" N: F) |" ]. E' j2 r5 }$ @  F* T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 h3 y+ m* o4 x& z( f- G; [我请你剖开它

: v, g' H" k) [* ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 {. Q2 B- Y: x- j! x$ N/ j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>