【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ _/ d' B% e9 B1 E+ R" lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; [! M% s2 J! N  aThe sky is happy down to its soul
  N# g, O' q( n; U5 F$ B0 k% \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 \9 v1 `2 [, \" B  P4 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' l  T7 x$ ?5 O/ WYou needn’t fear anything
; L' S1 G, s; l. c4 F/ H$ z4 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( N/ L# n1 r( D; N( C4 J7 uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 n3 G9 A( T5 ]5 P( iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( P7 p7 B) I3 V+ M( g# }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ l7 C" n5 J8 O4 s! SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 ?. V1 [( J9 c: w2 }+ \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 O/ p  k2 ?5 n9 n9 U; D* MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( S& k9 X. c7 Z  Q2 m% v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ C5 l, x7 T3 f; n! C& X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, A" D  l! W0 X9 }5 x9 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  B8 v: A0 e9 {6 Y4 e* I1 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' v1 K. V5 t. \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; \$ [+ Z0 s8 x& J9 c+ e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; C( v- z9 Q# @& c* l' G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 e% r; z& U# M3 e% O6 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 b8 Z5 v$ S% B% q: r% |, E% w+ r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 f9 N: I6 T- J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: k, Z2 y( a: q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 O+ ]2 ^" z  ^; T, G. ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! g7 ]4 x) r, O( S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 d7 T* ^: z" g* U, e7 Y- j$ P5 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 A8 p9 ]5 Y, Q$ |; i8 O2 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 [# N" D; W, O1 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% O, V4 u" t  q* y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* w5 `- ^& `, R" m; j' n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" L/ l- a: j2 T" s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ S1 q! Z% h( [  e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 Q/ Z; w) F( ]6 A6 J" p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ E2 {$ y$ O% o' B" y9 b" b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; b. h* S' b, \( ]. S, c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ y( T9 K8 Q" m) }; I: o& L$ g6 Q# B( J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* C9 @  p/ @5 _+ ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- O. m* X8 L- t+ W# k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* g! F) |' f0 a# @( L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  G9 W7 H" {# _5 M. N( C我请你剖开它
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. Z( k  c" Y: N, n, ~: C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 K0 a" J" u5 i( E. h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>