【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 M9 Z$ [$ x( N- j! y: G) s歌词我附在后面。
8 F9 E& _  i. E2 b9 Y& y; YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; v. ~7 w  ?# n+ B8 F. [3 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ g  [4 {$ q. K4 s1 C8 s& Q; }9 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 Y, X' W! c$ d$ a9 Z8 gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 ~. `6 L$ z2 h( I  @2 X& SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ U) a2 x# J. h0 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 W3 |2 P- t; j# B: a: cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 N2 ^; I! y' I6 E$ `3 `0 q0 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ t8 L8 c! s, PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) _5 }1 F, {7 J1 y. H) VWith such a tongue as yours,
$ U- y9 {. C% v7 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! H! e8 C% C& X5 y2 ]. SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ l# Z* f8 e0 c. y1 ?# zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 E: L& G9 F! Q0 l( Y/ G0 V: w: J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( {$ y  ], O& ?: K: @0 n  k5 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 H3 N* g+ E: r- I: N3 z% F9 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: I) q' _! e5 r/ ^4 u4 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# @! d1 R* y9 Y4 _+ x0 D8 B# n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) _1 f7 Y+ w4 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& g! Y, ~1 t/ Q; U( k; q9 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% L& a! y7 t9 i1 Q" N- I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) s2 d! K$ l1 Q( X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- r9 ]. {/ q9 N$ J) S( I<P>你无需担心</P>
8 h2 U) f7 K( ]) l3 \2 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 t! N1 M! J# K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 f. ^2 p$ C  {! y9 x( t) x+ J2 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* T, Y& S* ]- V$ ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ R6 X$ v* P& z; p3 ^* L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, ]% K! m3 p( F- W4 E8 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; U+ W& ^+ d: J" V! |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ V2 b, M, V6 ^: k5 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* u, j7 Z; W: b, A: ?( Q2 o: m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; _# J2 R& z6 `7 s1 Z4 u5 [& R' V' Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- o7 d# M+ P5 C& V2 [$ c* R, W3 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 c2 Q3 v5 n1 \/ }& T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% z- }, R, C" c( j8 S8 X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  Y$ g% g& q( [) V# U" T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ @5 D( X. ^. W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# q; f) V% r4 \& t1 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ D9 D& Z5 K. a# b! S# h: G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- l- ]/ n" O/ F8 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 x. X& F' m& d* `: n( _' j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 v+ }2 X# D) W, `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' h) X! {; r, r' B# q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% B2 x% ?1 R+ N$ l% N/ X$ `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 K6 r4 v, w0 f, Q1 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 S4 O# a. m4 f1 D6 N$ {# |$ d0 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>