【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  v: V/ i' ^) ^$ ~" y- }! h4 Z9 e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# r% L8 {  F% F# L$ vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 P* ^: Q3 C$ ]) q% cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- F- Y2 r/ g3 N' p* E' }' lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 h) i6 D: Z  gYou needn’t fear anything
$ ^) r& @. ~2 }6 w& F' lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ i# I, P, {2 m0 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, ]  U' d, ^! h( B. A8 Q$ YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% L6 O: `' c2 H: |6 r1 F: MI want so much to see inside your heart
. n9 v9 |0 U; k" o, b* iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- `+ L: q4 |" o) ^7 `8 i/ @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 O4 q7 j2 y, K4 @- E$ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 h. w; z2 q1 t' Q: ^  tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 T) K/ u( G6 B1 O9 q2 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; b, H; s7 g5 a; q  L# {4 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ t$ b- |/ y8 U5 Q3 T) s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 X# y+ i0 _- m  ^; Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" |2 I+ o0 r6 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! G1 u: S9 Z8 d4 G, N3 t0 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) A) ?" G1 M  E! }4 F" o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 |: M' X* ~6 K8 J4 w7 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( D4 B. u( w/ v+ `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, n; z' k3 U/ q+ ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ]) `4 b# Z, O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 K& T. F1 g0 \8 ]$ z! z7 ~2 Q; K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( T/ @6 u& ]5 P: c& S1 J' h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 c+ Z4 _% A9 {& O" x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! [. W5 S, i2 v2 i& ~/ v. m, a7 x6 a7 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" r  J! P9 q/ D6 x% D4 \% `. R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* `$ Q5 g5 i; ?% `  i2 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& G1 S$ D. I- q& }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; r* S% d2 Z" Y; n# K, [* x& z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. E5 G4 _4 v! U2 g) ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 e$ C9 r& ^' O) \2 w, J; ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 I/ T& U! R( E: L  _# T6 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 l# M1 @& t% d7 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& N" i  J% ?/ i) h. n: _/ z, \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' O4 P  R6 h/ i, D" E6 [* w1 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 ?% X6 R1 A% L6 b/ S6 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& C1 C/ s( B( a$ a+ p, Z4 F8 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ K4 v& a" D2 g& S2 u, }+ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ T! d! C. e- f) I' r! i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& c4 B& P& A' d, ^  M' w1 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% @& N- t/ a2 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 J. G% Y" ]  s) |( N. r! E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) e3 _* K& A5 l5 h/ n+ q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 f( h3 u" q' h1 i, V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ [& K* Q4 E% D" X$ ?. {$ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ y/ q4 M2 Z- J( I4 {+ |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ P6 v  \9 c7 Y( D6 J4 F# X( p: m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>