【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 A' L$ G# t/ @& a* c5 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" `3 ?$ ?  h/ X% e: }: @With the moon kissing it every night
, Y- {" \3 ]5 }3 p. t! qSeeing the sky content with its love
& l5 m% J: S' k3 ~: |. \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! J+ f& K4 @9 n5 v1 j8 n0 _. R5 bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 v! ^1 X7 x1 N& {( M' YI love you I love you with all my heart
' C7 r. t9 j. }$ L5 q9 h$ v% jNothing can compare to my love
$ s% L! t- T7 O! }* t+ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 d& r) n( n/ ?- k% cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* k1 R$ ^! E: tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ?7 H8 b9 b# j7 FI regret not dying
$ ^. M7 T# S* R7 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 j( i9 F& L9 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% P( J4 L1 g/ F; x  n4 a; vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 |! e0 z0 I1 m7 Z9 ^% P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 W1 p! }  Y& N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: C  h: M3 A( X: K; o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 j0 C7 a+ s) W' V7 H2 ?" u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' z$ Z8 y5 }4 T! c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; a" {. h% e% v$ p' a$ u/ @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, d# F+ M, [% I9 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 I  B$ K% X5 ?0 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 l$ G5 Q  L7 q. c# _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" |0 D% _% A5 b! l$ E, B, g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 h. F5 y2 D6 o; D$ I! m- m' d7 s; x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& a7 Z% P3 w0 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- P* x' G, ^0 L7 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, `. b, c( N  d) l! h& y( n1 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- ~) s5 s  k+ x1 K/ Q) A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 u7 |6 U7 s, @% D<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ V  e0 B+ L0 l5 c* l5 D6 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. {; \7 g$ \7 h' Z* x$ }3 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 v0 r# z, }3 @, `) [2 l; |; V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 t" O) V) G# `, [) A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# J5 U* K# ]! b% _2 H# x5 G! B4 Z2 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  ]. M7 q9 m' c/ t* d5 I我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, F+ ~* n& y3 J4 z. a9 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>