【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, C- W/ K# p0 B4 p/ {+ s% SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, }( z  H. ?+ K3 e! ?! gThe sky is happy down to its soul
. w: }' _" v. b* R; ^/ A! {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; e6 Q" J; N# C  o7 Z! @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( d& R1 m) ~& e" lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& Q. \# [  I. S  B( C4 kNothing can compare to my love
& K1 M$ r8 ^4 v4 P& H- kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  \" B4 F) [5 i/ R' x: |I want so much to see inside your heart
+ J6 Q7 p5 M: D3 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 ]# |& v, L3 e8 |I’m still filled with fear
& D8 J$ v/ ?/ nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& \% I9 y( m  J2 ?, B/ iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) U+ Y: v5 m  E! {! V0 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, C0 N0 r' n" t9 e1 O) BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; g  p7 D, [# G1 P6 Q% t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, w+ o( `# H& L) G: X$ z" B/ i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, a! v7 S" Q* a7 r# v1 l. q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' M! q6 K" ^4 Q: ]( a6 @+ W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 x/ m" Y6 k+ z$ |. w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 J8 ~8 B. v& V, r. r$ V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# O, Z0 C; q" B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 n# c  [6 t# [5 F: S/ E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: d0 ~; }/ K6 C. |/ y5 l4 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 M5 ~( m* O& c9 |6 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 F( r# N) l5 c" g: Y. T$ v! _<P>你无需担心</P>
! Y( K* c! y% A7 X1 c5 e3 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( B2 N/ f$ B# U' ?6 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! l* _( K. p9 G0 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 b. D! m( V# N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 X* n. a& g# c  X# [4 I& i$ h* Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 m, X; D0 b3 E5 t6 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 T- i; N& W: ^# E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 u/ v( B& ^+ c! M$ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 R1 Z. `  L: t% j, _' _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 ], j" }: L$ n  F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 J6 z: V) Q5 d9 q0 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  f6 z5 z- B6 u+ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 x* O' K; B4 s. P) m/ r/ p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& N1 B" k8 O, r) q; H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- o; {3 b- n( \( G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( x0 h+ R8 ~  q/ ]2 v2 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ~! u; U3 G! b6 n5 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 n/ O1 \! v: c* o& E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, H& B3 d( M. ^/ G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 w" j+ _% ^, n# `, p$ g5 j0 i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! y! R: ^# v4 V+ p+ z. ~' O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>