【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: E' n0 n- b  y# q* }歌词我附在后面。
5 \+ g# ~, \# |- g. f/ ~( w" @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  W- t6 N9 R6 u2 e: ]. KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 }( A' B" S5 B; c+ `- M" n" {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: e  \7 l8 m; _+ t0 {3 }% y$ W' |- S* ]The sky is happy down to its soul
3 o5 I* V: G% _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 y& U+ r, z0 q  O, U! C! rEvery other word you utter is love
; [4 T- S  P4 ?5 }3 eI really want to know just how much you love me
: Q4 @- a! n: x& }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 O: C9 N) `' ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 u+ T  @0 I6 d/ Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% j' M; |! O0 w. \+ j! @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ S, |( t( M& [1 H# w) _  }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. I9 r) y/ ^+ l9 D) U$ Z  W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Z: e4 ?9 e; ~7 W- l6 P4 [: z/ f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 |" t3 N& I3 U<P>你无需担心</P>
5 h& s+ ^6 G4 D( [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. R5 p1 D4 J0 t0 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' Z$ p1 E/ V5 D2 R% T+ O5 R' ]% Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! @+ g2 a$ o2 g( u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- |. `; n: E* }7 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' Q( H/ z" W7 l: H* p- S# T6 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* P; D2 r0 c2 e8 e  ~- A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 h( `: q5 N) ]6 w; ]$ N3 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 \7 ~! d. ~6 j- s. L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" W$ g# Z6 V" u3 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) `  O8 u4 Q" x6 H2 Z2 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ~. H4 L) P+ i( h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 W& b: L# G: }3 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( _; V+ V1 ~) m0 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 J5 m3 N% H, w) Q2 h; c1 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 h3 G9 m1 f6 z我请你剖开它
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6 m% J) ]1 D8 n: M- y7 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ~: ]8 Z. Q, N, Q2 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>