【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 E5 L  t/ ^. _$ r, K" I歌词我附在后面。
- p$ x9 {1 O, ^  a" E/ O) }$ ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ C$ W5 G. s3 }. {! ~. vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; g! z0 n) J; U* }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( q$ Q! t- e( e! z& o& R: ?2 x' UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 w  Z; D/ m4 M& IThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ s+ e7 }7 Y9 |" v0 G) C5 |& QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" ?, f) g) |1 d! Y9 W; EYou needn’t fear anything
! z2 \, K6 c& d& ~  q: f( r& ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# |/ r2 W0 ]7 u" g2 k9 _: Y- EI love you I love you with all my heart
: S% M* w* k# ^% }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ m* ~2 J( }( XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 d3 ~0 n. @! Z2 k! n7 rI’m still filled with fear
+ B! [' o6 y  X/ _3 F+ M% LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( j( |2 m# M6 C1 G  V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 m% U: F, X# {: k2 D, V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 u  `! i5 k) H: ]* U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ t) |% ~/ U. Y8 ~' \9 W5 g% w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ~" h2 _! S( S$ g# g, U0 ]) `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 Y6 S: w8 P% p3 A, {3 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 B- t0 e# V1 G. U% K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* `( q# M' P& C0 F5 V! t' u. B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ L* s7 |$ n5 D- o* \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 x* }1 C- }& b( l; [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# s( Q0 a8 |- G" T( o4 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! {" L5 F) W8 i# ?' o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, x- z3 W; D1 D7 [  R7 y* ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% }/ a. u* B  G) M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 x/ e5 G0 J. h+ b* c% W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! F* s% z' q* ^3 W- W# G3 t; g9 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 p. I/ B* ~5 y" \6 `/ o9 `6 B3 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 W* c4 ~) v3 x% M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 X; M  O2 a6 T0 O' o6 v: ?' t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ `! t3 E# {) y4 D1 j) K/ R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* r4 l* [0 L: X8 c; U5 I' C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. _/ |: E  O7 ?: V- \) F- t& q# O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: b5 H/ B, I, Q# Y" ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: K# ]: ^: x/ R: D7 a9 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: j! r. H) e$ }/ o4 Z* f8 `- C6 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- R$ H" W( T5 g7 M: n' C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: `; C# o- _4 a/ g& w; l. e" g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- [+ w; l& ^0 g. G我请你剖开它

3 C, ?( N+ l2 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ k; E6 r5 k2 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>