【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" z7 y9 k) N2 T3 K+ |' YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# k. Y* f. t4 F8 q: H6 @8 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 x) E' u8 t9 w! h& XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 V3 L1 N" d; h; d! {' AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ^# C" K3 Q* p& ~0 g! _$ SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* O; Y* [8 N0 ?; Q  g" A( Y$ qI’m still filled with fear
* A0 g/ `( m% x4 Q1 l8 s( CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) w" E2 O+ ]4 VWith such a tongue as yours,
+ L5 ^% z! q, [3 \. r- F8 X" zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 h5 ^5 x  W- M2 r; eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 P: P, d4 O$ s$ J& [) y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ `$ Q! j" o5 x  D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ J9 T1 x- ~8 j+ A+ x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 T) y" ?% m! [6 A! b* u6 M. ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! E: x* ~: w$ s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# g# {+ p) k5 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 v$ n/ k! R" p7 b% }8 ]9 y; M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; u! q' H% L) l4 c6 n& M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 S3 W, R$ z' ~& c6 q5 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! X1 K  |/ z; k9 e$ S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) }& q7 u3 ?5 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 M$ M! l) z1 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# L  G7 I; l- J5 \$ b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ T! x) a# ^7 X+ S& A' U5 Z3 G. }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; Y8 Q/ ]0 A5 i1 P9 r) i3 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 A- W4 V) z0 j, I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 a" n; T5 U3 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, E$ _% m" s( @8 Q2 q( u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& o( Z, j4 W4 G  B( C7 f% l$ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; z/ |: F2 ~7 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; |% e! L3 Z( ?6 c9 F9 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" h7 I! z7 U/ t0 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
% U% M9 ~" O# J) s8 [: u3 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 }5 H, w5 }& Y; `' p) B. D" B0 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 E6 u" V$ ]9 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) M, n$ E5 g" `1 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' j/ }( @$ n$ |0 }8 j7 w% o9 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, s, u7 j6 i' o' d# r: @! N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 z( h* n1 x7 z5 |8 E( F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# r! \0 k( m& N7 H2 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( a7 [0 \. q5 l! m3 ~; ?' J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 |) G' M# D) ^5 i7 t( d  O* X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>