【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 V( ?$ |% I, c3 c. ?2 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ F2 M$ C& v. F! h0 {; B" F/ s0 O& _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 G3 q8 l, c. g4 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& A/ F. e" p2 Y& f9 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 ^0 G! ^+ u/ k1 ^$ U$ U  d! T+ _I really want to know just how much you love me
3 u# d. O" }& F& y5 EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: l4 a. s& L4 E. |6 ~3 O5 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' [7 `, s, C( R! bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& k! ?8 E1 y) H& z# ^( W3 ?: R& N5 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' o: p& q/ y5 o8 I9 b( sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ K' l9 O0 q7 f! u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: Y; \5 L! V( @2 l3 ?) Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 h% O( `2 C# s) \" g6 L( ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 O9 _3 V+ b% b3 C& N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" [- X/ Z3 W/ _7 u4 t6 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, J8 y/ c5 {9 |& K' v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' R# j3 b5 d- ]% X( X. B6 Q+ y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 g# i# j& `0 N" l9 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 c9 c& J" a$ v. S4 ?. c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' w: q8 Y' E+ B& h  Z; s# r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. E1 k" X; J6 X1 h2 u0 \  k/ _4 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 o( {" U. J7 u) V2 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; e5 U* D  o" n& b* z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ `+ |5 w- `$ j. H: ~- X& q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# [. k& G( V/ g0 h+ m2 B( O. ~. T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! ], I1 }/ u4 |# S0 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' p' X& i  h0 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; H7 p& _% ^% k- I' S) E- F  q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ^" B% B- k8 w% t* ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ u; i3 z% T) b5 z" H+ Q' J' U( J. Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 }2 m% X* r( c" N6 [; H! o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ^# f; N; Q1 l4 [3 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ h+ K( u/ [: {$ y# v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% D4 D, X7 m% h1 l0 d0 I; Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# J+ h3 E7 S( s4 y3 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 H( N9 E. ~. B( e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( n. ~5 j# D$ F5 }. h2 w% k: M7 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 _5 K) c, E/ {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  Y8 Z: N  S/ f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% q# X8 V! L- V4 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) s4 S' y* P5 R. u! [* h4 |! q2 ]0 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 {/ q; f% U7 P% L6 y3 c' j. B3 a% T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( i- J' v3 ]$ L0 P: @1 p, b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( b' g7 |7 t! U& L  n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) X4 H0 r3 F& a' x$ x! I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 j( t& s. |' S& G" m# _4 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 m6 W; ]: ^0 E+ {$ T* r& R4 S8 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% U4 Y( [% I: n! n+ p9 D我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ [% D% k' o% E9 N6 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>