【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 `( @2 i% M4 n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 V# a4 C/ [$ i$ \Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 p1 Q# ]8 a$ P- e3 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 O& Q" c" t1 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ b' i. p4 P( N/ K# nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 I* t5 E6 N- G. XEvery other word you utter is love
( ^. e' T, o- d. T3 L) K) ?  NI really want to know just how much you love me
/ k& C# v6 k! ]- \8 E! t9 n3 KI love you I love you with all my heart
: X& n- a6 T3 F2 P2 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ P1 C  Y7 A/ d" }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( C/ A  {0 r5 }% s6 N) y; kI’m still filled with fear
2 q7 x) t4 D' ~4 q' p  i6 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ?5 t, x& |  ~0 L, B+ K+ hI regret not dying
: k( F4 @$ {" g& nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* v1 d2 Q' ]! u5 d5 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 O4 v- [3 Z) J3 A) `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- |8 @. l; j! I1 R8 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 Z. _5 b, n1 W& q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ m( K: d$ z- @1 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ ~: @0 |: f  ^2 g# M: S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 ?3 Y! W3 O* Q1 \4 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" s; e8 ^' _7 k' q% E: A3 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 `8 C  i3 w' X" t' C6 p8 s7 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 p1 m. |  A1 j* U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 j9 I: Y% n& }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 w- ^4 t) L* h4 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. o; H  Q, q- t! ?& W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- T3 [, z% u8 Y! P8 L8 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  X! A/ ~2 m6 @  Y3 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 Y, ]: T- Z& x. W& ?' P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 I0 c- f+ c# J' F& T, H6 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; x) p: p( @3 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 _" U0 T/ t* z* B& d& i$ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 ~, G# }* l' A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 g1 R. @' f, t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* e, n5 q4 l% j% V& S, j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( |( D9 n' d- B" c6 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ h0 H: s  b! S4 D! X4 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 k* D- v5 s9 z5 L* Z) e0 n0 Z" R7 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( X  e3 U8 R, ^1 [+ ~, N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 V& j$ R$ m3 h+ X  E: J5 ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( @4 Z# M! n- D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>