【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 ^3 v( }; Z1 U0 M6 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 ?5 |) L' Y9 ?: ]* V9 J( fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* [8 q( I, H% k7 L, qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 @, F% M& z& T+ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 b+ V8 \" c0 U; f/ |% i1 h8 i0 }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) b& G/ V/ b- s! b, _' [1 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 n9 z4 M9 I/ r* y8 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 A5 q+ [4 D  j6 s4 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  k* d- H, m& i- q- b. k& X+ y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 i  `9 B) [0 ?, D% L' `/ M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 s+ R& k1 R" t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& R7 b( X: r7 s, X1 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& F. W) e3 ~# y$ i* H0 E# j5 Y9 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- y: C* p' D/ E- E0 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; r) V! Y8 q# `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ z- H* G2 z; \/ X! D0 V9 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' O5 N1 @) t0 ]/ Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 a: F7 S; m5 m2 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 `6 D5 p1 w; F0 k. n9 y. L1 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 P( M) z" ^& k2 m9 m. v  ?  x$ L  o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 O* C6 I9 M  x6 [$ l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% p4 F3 o2 @9 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ |! C+ a% o  A  W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 }6 A' l: T+ h' J! H- g% \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 C& S: I4 b1 g! T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 S0 Q. v$ Z, A0 N& e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 G: ~5 \7 }- y' ]1 ~! R/ P# L1 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 t" B+ I! Z" T$ C: }* Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 s7 }5 j; ]0 H: D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 C! d3 Q& l. |  z7 B0 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 b" e- [2 A' K, t5 v9 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' Z( A6 T" ^% U, {# x. C0 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 l: p9 h* o' |1 w9 [! V6 x# A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; p$ l& ~6 i  A9 s4 Z/ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>