【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- O- C% N1 w& wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 I$ P$ ^9 J2 n( [# \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- ~6 A6 W3 K% F, N% S9 O* X% g# ]3 V  GSeeing the sky content with its love
) {: h# p8 r3 ]# V: U& j# _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ q4 m& G4 t. l2 [* jEvery other word you utter is love
1 o8 D, h+ \3 j( S8 RI really want to know just how much you love me
( U" Y( M0 P$ |  z+ D8 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 t5 @* Z8 c2 b* hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: e* q4 Y* s- b) Q2 z6 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' A7 q8 y; A/ i' _" ^0 ]( o6 RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  x, [- J; _; X; @  c1 G" C& E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ D! A4 v' v' R; {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 P$ Y1 J, v6 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" C1 S9 j" {3 O# k* \, D, |2 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ V$ X: U; S" B/ M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" h7 {3 G4 F/ [; m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 ~6 Q- y0 O- i: M" k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: n- }- l0 X$ o9 @. J% A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ J" H' F1 S: \% A+ a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' A" K4 g( t# D! l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 e  i9 x: |( T0 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' g' K0 H( s/ }+ o4 O% u+ D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: o. b" ]& @1 e2 x+ |8 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. T& t2 u* W8 F. F) b2 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" \& W- [. g6 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 Q( O# }7 @' m3 ^; F3 N6 l1 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ A; |: x) A1 V  D, N6 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& \) X0 f3 I* f" m. B, i: e3 e; W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% Z9 U: q5 A! O5 \+ R3 H5 U2 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& K( \, r- H$ |' F$ L2 |- n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: O, y8 l6 @. l2 C3 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& N6 u9 h+ G7 n9 M/ \# N5 y4 P& {/ O; P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* }  C: F0 [# ^' e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. r. [# V' ~' H: o: @1 U! j# |  d+ X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 `; M1 T+ y: U0 g/ E) G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ a5 m7 c; y/ ^7 e7 ?4 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ g4 n: i6 I: }8 U8 I+ E* P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ y  @# n: z" x8 ^. R: I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& U3 _8 {. {5 `- j我请你剖开它
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; [7 t  e  ~; I2 X, J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" @! x( f; K6 c! i$ }/ _9 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>