【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! _+ e/ N8 s# {6 T7 [9 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 N- T/ B# @4 _! V+ A# CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 }% O$ H2 l! r# XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 r6 H/ M1 c. k- x( {6 K# Y& _Seeing the sky content with its love
2 w0 e! l! l' G0 u1 \% }1 ^; uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ r& ?/ Z* T0 n# f3 _I really want to know just how much you love me
; }- `8 z+ U( b* e8 qI love you I love you with all my heart
* ]$ F, E+ F# E1 J; ?7 dNothing can compare to my love
* y) }7 O4 B8 Z1 j. U) ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ J# K, m4 k3 c" H, XI want so much to see inside your heart
8 C/ b* |* ]: _5 m$ LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  t9 L' o. q6 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 w7 a4 h& W+ R- o' l6 |7 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" t" a2 O* q% T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' x9 O" k% O' {' T1 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- a0 h. f% I6 W- E4 X! D* Y6 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' j& u- h! O, b0 S+ M) m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ n& t" ?) h7 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 e; c4 O9 q) F9 Z1 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 h+ Q8 N* s' K& o! }8 Q& O5 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 @' A2 ]. b1 ~1 m/ w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ J  l6 K# n" o! @; ?/ Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 }5 e- A: q7 m0 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 G9 \% V8 l1 Y: _  o' G( n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 b, V3 D" ^# H9 c, [2 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Y! B) A" Z; o- d: n# v- J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 X9 H' ~/ g( _; _9 P* _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: O+ S1 j+ r) S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  e. H' v% S/ r& }1 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ d5 q& K% {9 [; m8 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 n4 C8 N7 i4 N, t% u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! T3 A( _& T; ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ^- u( s/ N! H: U4 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( C8 C$ ^) {9 s! z9 g/ x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ L  k$ K9 |% P, Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( B" n. v) N1 l  B- z  ~: m8 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& j& s) m0 I1 s# N/ A/ h8 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
+ r9 b( ?6 l$ ]# |. S6 Z
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>